In 20 years USA has attacked many countries including Irag, Somalia, Afghanistan, the Sudan air strikes, Bosnia, the Liberia
The question is why USA did this? For what?
Like ASAHI newspaper said, USA got a big money everytime when they did some action.For instance, when the Gulf War happened Saudi Arabia gave the US16,300 million dollars, Kuwait gave 16 billion dollars, Japan 13,500 million dollars gave to the USA as support money.
Later USA said they spend all of money for justice but some people who were doubting said USA should used just half of that money.
There is a Military-Industrial Complex in USA. In this system, govement gives a job to company that would not otherwise benefit. If USA needs guns, goverment can order and give money to that company. It sounds good system, but there is a big problem. When the Iraq war happened, some companies that made arms are got huge benefit and also 32 bureaucrats were in these company as an officer and a stockholder.
And before First world war in 1914, war`s cost was 1% of GPD. It later rose to 13.9%.
After WWII, war`s cost of GDP becamed 37.5%.
Why do we have to kill people? For money? For oil? People can live comfortable because of that money and I am sure that we are using that money even while we say that the system is not good.
Hidetaka,
返信削除Pretty good first post. You forgot to include your facts. Just list them (3) at the bottom of your article. That way, I can see that facts that you think are most important for your argument.
Good design of your website. Can you put all of the content in English, though? I cannot read Japanese.
Try to keep all of your text together. There are too many spaces between some words. The paragraph that begins with: "And before First..." needs to be cleaned up. Keep all text in neat format for your readers.
Use and apply the skills we learned in class to have clear paragraphs: 1. Intro with facts about the event 2. opposing viewpoints 3. your analysis (opinion) and conclusion.
Ok for your first post.
Grade: 80